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Beastly Lunch by spiritwar Beastly Lunch by spiritwar
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"Hey! Monster! You going to cost a lot eat this snack, bad bug. Or your, or I, one of the two will eat meat during the lunch. "
Gark " The One Eyed", barbarian orlanthi of Sartar's Kingdom.

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“¡Ey! ¡Monstruo! Te va ha costar mucho zamparte este bocado, mal bicho. O tu, o yo, uno de los dos comerá carne durante el almuerzo.”
Gark “El Tuerto”, bárbaro orlanthi del Reino de Sartar.
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karla-chan Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a really cool idea, but the way he is posed isn't right compared to the scene what is going on, it is too unstable if he is trying to fight his way out, so he would have a more study stance, mainly have to legs down. The fact it is a slight diagonal angle doesn't help because he looks more like he is falling to to the monsters mouth. Also his left arm is thicker then his right.
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spiritwar Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Thank you for your comment and critiques. It me will come very well in my learning. On the arm, to indicate to you that this slightly more behind than other one, also the hard shadow of this, reduces very much volume. If you are interested in it, to see the details of the illustration better, visit my blog: [link]
Again, thank you very much for your comment.
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karla-chan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am happy you have found it helpful. :)
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